Life, Death, and Entertainment in the
* First
edition, 1999 – xvi + 353 pages – 7 chapters
* Second
edition, 2012 – xx + 401 pages – 8 chaptersMy references are to the second edition of the book.
In the
preface, David Potter says:
“We would like to thank Jill Wilson, the copy editor for this volume, for her fine work on the manuscript.”
“We would like to thank Jill Wilson, the copy editor for this volume, for her fine work on the manuscript.”
If you ask
me, the copy editor did not do a fine work, because there are many flaws in
this book (factual mistakes, misprints, unfortunate statements and omissions).
Oddly enough, the flaws are not everywhere. This book is so uneven. The level
of accuracy is:
* HIGH - in
chapters 2, 3, 4 and 6 [i.e. no flaws]
* MEDIUM - in
chapters 5 and 7 and the index [i.e. only a few flaws]
* LOW - in
the introduction and chapters 1 and 8 [i.e. many flaws]
Let me
document this claim with some examples:
A
General Observation
The editors
are presented on the back cover of the book. What about the other six
contributors? They are not presented anywhere, not on the back cover, and not
inside the book. This is a strange omission.
As far as I
know, all contributors are still alive, except Keith Hopkins, who died in 2004.
His contribution appears in the second edition, but the editors do not mention
the fact that he died in 2004. This is unfortunate.
About the Introduction to the New and Expanded Edition
On page
3 we are told the
Potter
seems to have a problem with the word “capital” and the word “capitol.” He uses
the latter when he should use the former.
[The word
“capital” marks the main city, while the word “capitol” is short for “Capitolium,”
the Capitoline Hill in Rome , where the Romans built a temple
for the supreme Roman god Jupiter Optimus Maximus.]
Potter
makes this mistake three times in the introduction (pp. 5, 7, 9) and six times
in chapter 8 (pp. 290, 297, 325 (twice), 326, 345).
[Surprisingly,
the word “Capitol” is used correctly on page 184. This case is in chapter 5,
also written by Potter.]
About
Chapter 1:
The Roman Family
Ann E. Hanson
seems to have a problem with chronology: she says Trajan died in AD 118 (page
35). But this emperor died in 117.
[The
correct dates for Trajan appear on pp. 157, 304, and in the index.]
On page
38 Hanson mentions the famous church father Augustine of Hippo. She calls him “Saint Augustine .” But she refers to something that
he did while he was alive. While he was still alive, he was not yet a saint. In
order to be a saint you must be dead.
Hanson
seems to have another problem with chronology: she says Vespasian died AD 78
(page 49). But this emperor died in 79.
[The
correct dates for Vespasian appear in the index.]
On page
54 note 36 Hanson gives a cross-reference: “… Checklist of Editions (cited
above, p. xii).” But the reference should be to page xiv.
Hanson
seems to have a problem with geography as well: on page 61 we are told that
Hadrian built his famous villa at the foot of the Alban Hills “southeast of Rome .” The Alban Hills appear again on
page 64, only this time they are located “east of the city.” The Alban Hills
are located ca. 20 km south of Rome, and Hadrian did not build his
villa there. His villa is located near Tibur (modern Tivoli ) ca. 30 km east of Rome .
On page
63 Hanson mentions the famous Greek doctor Galen (Aelius Galenus), who was
asked to take care of the young Commodus. In this connection she mentions “one
of the emperor’s relatives, Annia Faustina, who was concerned about the boy.”
Who is this woman? Hanson does not tell us. We know three women with this name:
* Faustina
I, also known as Faustina the Elder, was married to Antoninus Pius. It cannot
be her, because she died in 140. Commodus was born in 161. This episode must
have taken place ca. 165 when Commodus was just a boy.
* Faustina
II, daughter of Faustina I, also known as Faustina the Younger, was married to
Marcus Aurelius. It could be her, but if it is, we have to ask: why is she
described as one of the emperor’s relatives? She is the emperor’s wife and the
mother of Commodus.
* Faustina
III, daughter of Faustina II, was born in 147. In 165 she would have been ca. 18
years old. It could be her, I think it must be her, but if it is, we have to ask: why is she described as
one of the emperor’s relatives? She is the emperor’s daughter and the sister of
Commodus.
Perhaps
Hanson does not know who this person is. If this is the case, I think she
should just come out and say so. It is not a good idea to avoid the question by
using a vague expression as “one of the emperor’s relatives.”
About
Chapter 5:
Roman Religion: Ideas and Actions
In
chapter 5 about Roman religion the word “augur” is mentioned several times,
because it is the title of a Roman priest. Potter seems to have a problem with
this word: sometimes he writes “auger” [singular] or “augers” [plural] (pp.
153, 168, 175). The word is listed in the index, where the spelling is correct.
On
page 181 Potter mentions the sacrifice of different animals: sometimes cattle, sometimes
sheep, and sometimes a pig. He does not mention the special ceremony in which
the Romans sacrificed three animals at the same time: a pig, a sheep and a bull.
In Latin: SUS, OVIS, TAURUS. The ceremony is known as SUOVITAURILIA.
On
page 190 Potter says:
“…Constantine established the Christian faith as
the central faith of the empire, the Christian god (who permitted no rivals) as
the protector of emperors.”
“…
This statement
is unfortunate, because the status of the Christian religion is not clear. Did Constantine make the Christian religion the
official state religion or not?
The answer
is Constantine recognised the Christian religion,
but he did not make it the official state religion. This did not happen until
much later, ca. 391, during the reign of Theodosius I. This fact should be stated
clearly, with no room for misunderstanding.
About Chapter 7:
Amusing the Masses: Buildings for Entertainment and Leisure in the Roman World
On
page 229 note 1 there is a cross-reference to chapter 7. This cross-reference
was not updated from the first edition. The note should refer to chapter 8.
On
page 243 Hazel Dodge refers to “IRT.” This abbreviation is not explained anywhere.
The letters stand for Inscriptions of Roman Tripolitania. It is the title of
a book published by the British School of Rome in 1952. Since 2009 “IRT” has been a searchable database on the internet. Here is a link: Inscriptions of Roman Tripolitania.
About Chapter 8:
Entertainers in the Roman Empire
On
page 292, note 27, there is a cross-reference to chapter 4. This reference was
not updated from the first edition. The note should refer to chapter 5.
On
page 308, note 57, there is a cross-reference to chapter 6. This reference was
not updated from the first edition. The note should refer to chapter 7.
On
page 299 Potter mentions a festival celebrated in the east which he calls
“Maiouma.” This festival is also mentioned on page 260 by Dodge who calls it
“Maiuma.” Both spellings may be acceptable, but it is unfortunate that one word
is spelled in two different ways in the same book. The word is listed in the
index where it is spelled “Maiouma.”
[A search
on the internet seems to indicate that most people who cover this topic prefer
the spelling chosen by Dodge: “Maiuma.”]
Potter
seems to have a problem with chronology: on page 305 he says Lucius Verus ruled
161-168. But this emperor ruled 161-169. For Gallienus, Potter has two
different dates: on page 307 he says 253-268 (true); but on page 324 he says
253-270 (false).
The following
passage on pp. 312-313 is a clear case of poor editing:
“… Tacitus’
observation is a very much more interesting for the study of the Roman psyche…”
The three
words “a very much” should have been deleted by the author or by the copy
editor. Apparently, none of them noticed this awkward passage.
On
page 326 we are told the famous Roman charioteer Porphyrius was honoured “with
two monuments” in Constantinople ’s hippodrome. Potter refers to Alan Cameron’s book Porphyrius: The Charioteer (OUP, 1973) pp.
121-126. The reference is correct. But if you follow this reference, you will see
that Cameron presents a list of not two but seven monuments for Porphyrius in
the hippodrome. The statues are lost, but two of the seven bases are preserved.
On
page 326 Potter says:
“The ability of circus performers to mix with members of the highest aristocracy resulted in the daughter of a bear keeper of the Green faction becoming the empress Theodora.”
“The ability of circus performers to mix with members of the highest aristocracy resulted in the daughter of a bear keeper of the Green faction becoming the empress Theodora.”
Theodora’s
father was a bear keeper for the Greens, and she did become an empress when she
married Justinian. But something is missing here, because Theodora is known as
a supporter of the Blues. How, why and when did she go from the Greens to the
Blues? Potter does not tell us the full story: when Theodora’s father died, the
Greens refused to help the remaining family. In desperation, they turned to the
Blues, begging for help. The Blues took them in, and from that moment Theodora
was a firm supporter of this faction. Justinian supported the same faction. On
this point Theodora and Justinian always agreed.
The
caption to figure 28 on page 334 describing a Roman mosaic from Africa mentions a person called Mageirius.
The name is given twice. But the name of this person is Magerius. The name is
also misspelled on page xii (the list of illustrations).
[When Potter
mentions this mosaic in his recent book about sport in the ancient world, he
uses the correct spelling of the name, Magerius: The Victor's Crown, 2011, pp. 234-235.]
In
chapter 8 there are two references to “Potter 1996,” page 332 (note 93) and page 337
(note 104). But this work is not listed in the bibliography. Donald Kyle
mentions this oversight in his review of the first edition in Bryn Mawr Classical Review (1999.10.36). An excerpt from this review is quoted on the
back cover of the second edition. Obviously, the publisher is well aware of this review;
but the publisher did not take the time to correct the oversight which Kyle
mentions in his review.
The
forgotten work – a contribution to Roman Theater and Society edited by W. J. Slater
(1996) - is listed in the bibliography of Potter’s recent book The Victor’s Crown.
About the Index
The
index is flawed because it is incomplete (several persons and places mentioned
in the text are not listed here), and because it gives false dates for the
following emperors:
* Antoninus
Pius, 137-161, instead of 138-161
[The
correct dates for this emperor appear on pp. 304 and 305.]
* Domitian,
71-96, instead of 81-96
* Hadrian,
117-137, instead of 117-138
[The
correct dates for this emperor appear on page 304.]
The Final Judgement
On the
positive side I can say: the second edition is better than the first because it
is more comprehensive, and because it provides a lot of useful information; not
too technical; readable and accessible.
On the
negative side I can say: the second edition is worse than the first because the
editors and the publisher allowed factual mistakes - even misprints - from the
first edition to be repeated in the second edition.
When it was
decided to publish a second edition, the editors and the publisher had a golden
opportunity to improve the quality of the book. Unfortunately, they did not
take it.
Life,
Death, and Entertainment in the Roman Empire is uplifting and disappointing at the same time. The
interesting essays written by prominent scholars are uplifting; this calls for
five stars. But the striking lack of accuracy found in some of these essays is
disappointing; and this calls for one star. On balance I have to go with three
stars.
PS. A slightly different version of this review was sent to one of the editors (David Potter) and to the publisher (University of Michigan Press) in September 2012. None of them responded.
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David S. Potter & David J. Mattingly, editors,
Life, Death, and Entertainment in the Roman Empire,
University of Michigan Press, second edition, 2010, xx + 401 pages
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