David J. Breeze is an Honorary Professor at the universities of
His book
about the frontiers of imperial Rome is based on ancient literary
sources, archaeological objects and modern scholarship. The main text is divided
into three major sections:
** Part I:
Sources – chapters 1-6
** Part II:
The Frontiers – chapters 7-13
** Part III:
Interpretation – chapters 14- 20
At the end
of the book there are five items: Conclusions - Further Reading -
Sites to See - Notes - Index.
The
illustrations are numerous and well-chosen. There are 48 black-and-white
illustrations (maps and drawings). In addition, there are 28 plates with photos
printed on special glossy paper in the middle of the book. Most photos are in colour.
In the
introduction the author explains what his book is about:
“The vital questions
at the heart of this book are therefore: how did Roman frontiers operate and
what were their purpose and role?”
He adds that
his book is not about Roman emperors, not about Roman foreign policy, and not
about the Roman army:
“The focus is firmly on the frontier installations themselves.”
“The focus is firmly on the frontier installations themselves.”
He hopes
his readers will be encouraged to visit some of the sites mentioned in the
book:
“The remains of Roman frontiers are best seen and understood in their topographical settings even though these have been modified over the last 2,000 years.”
I agree. You may learn a lot from a book about an ancient site. But you will
learn more, if you combine the reading with a visit to the site.
I like this
book. I like the systematic approach and the helpful illustrations. But I have
to mention a number of things which bother me:
(1) A word
is misspelled on page 58: “… an area called for reasons we do not known…” It should be: for reasons we do not know.
(2) A word
is missing on page 88. I have added the missing word in square brackets: “… and
therefore roads usually [are] a regular feature.”
(3) A
passage on page 114 begins like this: “Equally significantly…” It
should be: Equally significant…
(4) A verb
is wrong on page 146: “Gaul ,
too … were largely demilitarized.” What he wants to say is: Gaul was largely demilitarized.
(5) A word
is missing on page 200. I have added the missing word in square brackets: “the
obstacles [were] merely a firm intention to enforce the control of movement.”
(6) The
author thinks the modern abbreviation CE stands for the “Common Era.” It stands
for the Christian Era. Many people prefer the abbreviation AD. He thinks the modern abbreviation
BCE stands for “Before the Common Era.” It stands for Before the Christian Era.
Many people prefer the abbreviation BC. The Western calendar is a Christian calendar. Why try to
hide this fact?
(7) In his
introduction the author mentions a person he calls “Paul Kendrick.” The real name of
this American scholar, who lived 1914-1994, is Paul MacKendrick. If this scholar is an inspiration, why is his name misspelled? If his books
about "the mute stones" are an inspiration, why are they not listed in the
bibliography?
(8) The
“wonderful” distance slabs from the Antonine Wall are mentioned in the text on
pp. 73 and 88, but there is no entry for “distance slabs” in the index. There
is a colour picture of the distance slab from Hutcheson Hill (plate 18), but
the location of this hill is not shown on the map of the Antonine Wall (figure
18, page 72).
(9) The
word “Isohyet” is used – but not explained - on page 118. It is a line drawn on
a map connecting points that receive equal amounts of rainfall. Why is this rare
word not explained? And why is it not listed in the index?
(10) On pp.
128 and 188 the author refers to an inscription in this way: “IRT 880.” According to the abbreviations
listed on page xiv, the letters stand for Inscriptiones Romaines
d’Tripolitania, which is a curious mix of Latin and French. In fact the letters IRT stand
for Inscriptions of Roman Tripolitania. It is the title of a book which was
published by the British School of Rome in 1952. Since 2009 the inscriptions presented in this book have been
available in an online database established by King's College, London. This fact is not mentioned anywhere. Perhaps the author
is not aware of it.
(11) The
author has a problem with the first Jewish rebellion against the Roman Empire. It seems he is not quite sure when this rebellion took place: on page 18 he talks about “the
Jewish War of 68-70.” But on page 146 he talks about “the
Jewish War of 66-73.”
(12) The
author has a problem with the Batavian Revolt, which was led by Julius Civilis. It seems he is not quite sure when this revolt took place:
on page 25 it is placed “in the late 60s.” On page 92 he talks about “the
revolt of Civilis 69/70.” On page 95 he says it broke out 69/70. On page 189 he
gives only one year: 70. But on page 207 it is extended: 69-71. Most modern
sources say the revolt broke out in 69 and was crushed in the following year.
(13) The
author has a problem with the Dacian wars. It seems he is not quite sure when these wars took place: on page 103 we are told they took
place in 101-102 and 105-106, which is correct. But on page 84 he says they
took place in 101-103 and 105-106, which is not quite correct.
(14) The
author has a problem with Valerian: on page xvi we are told he ruled 253-259,
but Valerian ruled until he was captured in 260, and the author knows it. On
page 120 he writes: “The Emperor Valerian was captured in 260.”
(15) The
author has a problem with Hadrian’s Wall : two times (pp. 4 and 62) he claims the wall was 130 km , which is not true. On page 62 he
says it was 80 Roman miles, which is true. Since 1 Roman mile = 1.476 km , it follows that the wall was 118 km . On page 4 he says it was 74 miles , which is true. But the figure 130 km is still wrong. In chapter 8 (page
105) he claims 130 km = 80 miles , which is not true, because 130 km = 81 miles .
(16) The
author has a problem with the Antonine Wall: two times (pp. 4 and 71) we are
told the Antonine Wall was half as long as Hadrian’s Wall , which is true. On page 71 he says it
was 40 Roman miles, which is true. By his own logic, he should claim it was 65 km (half of 130 km ), but he does not. He says it was 60 km , which is not true either. It was 59 km (half of 118 km ).
(17) The
author has a problem with the Battle of Mons Graupius: on pp. 144 and 182 we
are told it took place in 83. But on page 148 he says it took place in 84. The
fact is we do not know the date of this battle with certainty. It happened in 83 or 84. Why not just say so?
The different interpreations can be illustrated by the following two book titles: Mons Graupius AD 83 by Duncan Campbell and Sean O'Brogain (2010) and The Roman Conquest of Scotland: The Battle of Mons Graupius AD 84 by Brother James E. Fraser (2005).
(18) The
famous general Gnaeus Domitius Corbulo is mentioned in the text (pp.
95, 137, 150 and 182). He is also listed in the index. In the text he is identified by his cognomen Corbulo, but in the index he is listed under his
family name Domitius. This is not very helpful.
(19) On
page 148 we are told that Emperor Septimius Severus died in 211, and the next sentence
runs like this: “His sons made treaties with the enemy, evacuated their
territory, and abandoned the forts.” On page 171 there is an almost identical
passage. We are told that Severus died, and the next sentence runs like this:
“His son abandoned both territory and forts.” The first time he talks about
“sons,” which is fair, because Severus had two sons, Caracalla and Geta. But
the second time there is only one son, which is not fair, because in 211 both
sons were still alive. Caracalla killed Geta after their return to Rome in 212.
(20) Severus
was born in Libya on 11 April 145 . In April 210 he was 65 years old
and partially disabled by gout. Why does Breeze talk about an “untimely death”
on page 148? Why does Breeze talk about an “early death” on page 171? Words
like these are reserved for a person who dies when he/she is still young. When
Severus died in York in February 211, he was almost 66 years old, a relatively high age in
antiquity.
(21) An
anonymous ancient account is listed in the bibliography (page 214) with the
title De rebus bellicis, which is correct. But when this account is mentioned
in the text (page 160) the title is given as De rebus bellicus, which is
false.
(23) A book
by Andrew Pearson from 2002 is listed in the bibliography (page 220) with the
title The Roman Saxon Shore Forts. But the word “Saxon” does not appear in the
title of Pearson’s book.
(24) At the
end of the book Breeze discusses the purpose of the Roman frontiers and the
frontier installations. On page 205 he sums up by giving three answers. The
purpose was to:
** Defend the empire against large scale attacks (military)
** Defend the empire against large scale attacks (military)
** Prevent small-scale raiding (military)
** Control the movement of people and goods (social and economic)
John Mann and others have suggested that at least one frontier installation,
The British
scholar Simon James believes an important reason for building Hadrian’s Wall
was to keep the soldiers busy and to keep them out of trouble for a while (see his book
Rome & the Sword (2011) pp. 159 and 170). In my opinion, this
suggestion is highly credible, but it is not considered - not even mentioned -
by Breeze.
(25) On the
inside of the dust jacket the publisher presents the contents of the book. The
presentation includes the following passage:
“He then reconsiders the question
of whether the frontiers were the product of an overarching Empire-wide grand
strategy, questioning Luttwak’s seminal hypothesis.”
This is not
true. Luttwak is mentioned only once, on page
204, but his hypothesis not mentioned or discussed. The phrase “the Grand
Strategy of the Roman Empire ” appears on page 211. This may be an indirect reference to Luttwak, but
there is no attempt to evaluate or question his hypothesis anywhere. Perhaps it is not fair to blame the author for this point.
The Frontiers of Imperial Rome is an interesting book, but there are many flaws. Some are minor. I can forgive them. But others are much more serious, and I cannot ignore them. Therefore I have to say: this book is good but not great.
The author is
very systematic, when it comes to the structure of his book. But when it comes
to well-known facts of Roman history, he is remarkably careless. How can an expert on Hadrian's Wall and the Antonine Wall not know the length of these walls?
I think Breeze
handed his manuscript to the publisher before it was ready for publication. He
should have given himself one more week or one more month to check it one more time. If he
had done this, he might have been able to eliminate the flaws listed here (if not all, then at least some of them).
It seems
the publisher - Pen & Sword - never checked his manuscript. Or, if they did, they did not do it
very well. I have informed the publisher about the flaws. I hope they will not
be repeated, if there is a second edition or a paperback version of the book.
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David J. Breeze,
The Frontiers of Imperial Rome,
Pen & Sword, 2011, 242 pages
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